Pretty nice song.
Really like the song. As a fellow metal fan, here's a couple quick suggestions/critiques:
- Really liked the voice, think you should keep it up.
- One big thing: Drums need more feeling. They don't sound terribly bad or anything (far from it), but they need a bit more umph put into them. Sound a bit too simplistic.
- Breakdown around 2:30 or so I really liked, but needs to be picked up a bit in my book. Again, not bad, just a bit simple.
That's about all I can think of at the moment. Excellent song except for a couple parts, keep up the good work :).